Final Storyboard

 This is my attempt at the final storyboard

Mini self reflection:

The drawing was challenging and very consuming yet i finished it all. Everything went according to how i want it to look. All shots are exactly how i wanted it to be and the duration of the ad is exactly 30 seconds.

Critical Self Reflection

 

This is my attempt to create the critical self reflection for my final storyboard

self-reflection Media Studies by Nicholas Limardi

mini self reflection:

The presentation was more difficult rather than the drawing, the amount of words I used was way more than it should have been. Although finished i still think that i could improve in describing the scenes and answering some of the questions..
 

1st Draft Storyboard

 This is my attempt in creating the draft of the final storyboard

Mini self reflection:

After finishing my first storyboard draft and getting feedback I will change some scenes such as the scenes where i sponsored other luxury products instead, using famous brand ambassadors of famous products. 

Storyboard practice

 This is my practice for the final storyboard

Mini self reflection:

Determining what type of shot was the easiest. The drawing was hard due to my lack in drawing skills. It helps me practice drawing and how to explain my drawing. I would explain better and if i could draw better. I would need to determine which scene is a different shot and determine if they are different.

Proposal for storyboard

This is my attempt to create a proposal for the storyboard i will be making

My advertisement will feature Jaguar Eyewear. In the ad, I will target an older(60) and rich audience. It will start showing a blind man walking in style and full of confidence going out of the Jaguar store and out to the sidewalk after buying the eyewear. Greeting everyone else with pride. He starts walking but since he is blind he walks into a pole and acts like nothing happened. Everyone else was looking in confusion but he still walked with confidence. But he walked in the wrong direction. After hitting the pol he went left which was away from the sidewalk and into the streets. A Jaguar car stops first with a perfect brake and no accidents. Random brands of cars behind the Jaguar car start crashing into each other. A truck from the other direction did not have enough time to stop and crashed into the blind man. He died and went to heaven still wearing the glasses waving and greeting all entities and god himself there.

The ad ends there and the video shows the slogan "You can't see people but people see You"  

After some discussions, the new ad will be: 

My advertisement will feature Jaguar Eyewear. In the ad, I will target an older(60) and rich audience. It will start showing a blind man walking into a store all sad and depressed navigating with his stick. The camera stays outside showing the store and after a while, the blind man starts walking in style and full of confidence going out of the Jaguar store and out to the sidewalk after buying the eyewear. Throwing the stick he needed to help him navigate the streets. Starts walking and greets everyone else with pride. He starts walking but since he is blind he walks into a pole and acts like nothing happened. Everyone else was looking in confusion but he still walked with confidence. But he walked in the wrong direction. After hitting the pole he went left which was away from the sidewalk and into the streets. A speeding car did not have enough time to stop before hitting the blind man that is still waving. 

Before the crash, the advertisement ends with the slogan "Almost the perfect eyewear"            

Text analysis - the quiet place

This is my video analysis of the quiet place

 

The text was an extract from a quiet place. The filmmaker wanted to show everything the characters do should be done in silence. The second idea is that the filmmaker hints at loud sounds something horrible will happen. The last picture is that the city was abandoned and left stranded. 

The main idea is when the characters produce a high volume of sound implies that bad things will happen. The characters were seen using sign language as a way to communicate with each other which shows the audience that talking with audible sounds will cause problems. The store the characters were in was shown with a long shot, to be dark and barely have any lighting. This tells the audience that electricity has been cut off to prevent the production of sounds from electrical items. The filmmaker used a close-up shot of the girl when she was walking around the store showing how she was tip-toeing to get around the store. This is a sign to the audience that the character is trying to produce barely any sound. Another hint shown to us audience is when one of the characters brought a toy specifically a plane that has a chance to emit loud sounds. A pov shot is used to show the facial expression of the man who seems like the father of the family. He is shown to be scared and frightened which shows the experience he had when loud sounds are emitted.     

Mini self reflection:

There are a lot of things i need to improve on. Determining the meanings of the scene and analysing the mis-en-scene better

My Target Audience